Live Creative; Live Better.
Aw, this is lovely... the ending with its repetition is beautiful.
I liked this......robImage & Verse
Sweet - it has a wistful quality that's quite endearing.
You have spun beautiful images with the words in the prompt. Loved reading your poem.
I love how you were able to use all the words in so few lines. Takes a lot of creativity! Your poem is lovely.
I loved the vivid imagery!now open, now close
I love this! And the last stanza is lovely!Pamela
Hey FSO friend- it was nice to see a familiar name on the prompt, and sight! I agree how you use all of the words in a short, but powerful piece is great!I need to come over here more often and look around. Did you know I do Muse Monday, for poetry/photos? I hope to get that going...Thanks for coming over, and I love how only a few know what nonpareils sugar even is...like how I manage to always make mine about food, lol!
Oh, yes - please be it slow! This is lovely, lovely!
Lovely is the word; soft and gentle.