Thursday, March 25, 2010

Get Your Poem On

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Because I Loved You

Because I loved you
I could not speak.

Blue with babyness
still on my cheeks
a hearted fool
with silent lips;

oh, your lips
are like a thousand sundaes
drip
sweet cream
chocolatey
wish
of
pinkness

dreams,
dream  no more.

When the sun is gone,
Darkness is
Complete.

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4 comments:

  1. What a lovely poem you have written here.
    Pamela

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  2. What depth of emotion you convey with such spare words! Masterful work.

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  3. like this poem and the imagexlynda

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  4. This is a poem about a lover's feeling over his/her loved one in a beautiful way. Very few words but it catches a lot of sentiments. Bot women and men can speak these words addressing their special one. It is a feeling of those who love someone truly but could not purpose. The poem has speak the hard situation of one sided love story.
    Thank you
    Robin jokes

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