dizzy with shock, all I know:
It was two o'clock
For some reason, I thought last weeks was "illogical" but it was "devotion". I am not sure why I was confused. However, if you are interested in my illogical haiku, click here
Sunday, March 28, 2010
Haikubones: Two O'clock
The prompt for this week at haikubones is 2 o'clock.
The crash came too quick;
dizzy with shock, all I know:
It was two o'clock
For some reason, I thought last weeks was "illogical" but it was "devotion". I am not sure why I was confused. However, if you are interested in my illogical haiku, click here
dizzy with shock, all I know:
It was two o'clock
For some reason, I thought last weeks was "illogical" but it was "devotion". I am not sure why I was confused. However, if you are interested in my illogical haiku, click here
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nasty shock accidents!
ReplyDeleteWhat a jolt--and the rhyme of shock/o'clock reinforces the jarring nature of the crash.
ReplyDeleteMy Bones
Like how you did it.
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BTW, most of us wrote on illogical for 21st Mar. I don't know when the proomp got changed to devotion. It shows 25th Mar on my Google reader.
what an excellent ku... not that the accident was good but that it fit so perfectly the form....
ReplyDeletePhoto and words merge together perfectly--sort of like an accident! (But, of course, it was a merger very much on purpose!)
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