Sunday, March 28, 2010

Haikubones: Two O'clock

The prompt for this week at haikubones is 2 o'clock. 


The crash came too quick;
dizzy with shock, all I know:
It was two o'clock




For some reason, I thought last weeks was "illogical" but it was "devotion". I am not sure why I was confused.  However, if you are interested in my illogical haiku, click here

5 comments:

  1. What a jolt--and the rhyme of shock/o'clock reinforces the jarring nature of the crash.
    My Bones

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  2. Like how you did it.

    transient

    BTW, most of us wrote on illogical for 21st Mar. I don't know when the proomp got changed to devotion. It shows 25th Mar on my Google reader.

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  3. what an excellent ku... not that the accident was good but that it fit so perfectly the form....

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  4. Photo and words merge together perfectly--sort of like an accident! (But, of course, it was a merger very much on purpose!)

    2.a.m.

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