(John's daughter painted the above picture on a whim.)
crimson, juicy, decadent.
magic infestation.
The prompt from onesingleimpression is hesitation:
Kiss
Amy Winehouse played
on the radio
singing "no,no,no"
I watched the curve
of your tanned face.
I sing along,
you smile,
I've never even smoked
a cigarette.
I'm stalling
for the moment
wonder if you know
what I'm waiting for.
Fiona Apple comes on next
and I cringe--
enough of these skinny girls
singing
being so meaningful.
Your lips tender
seem to hesitate,
I draw in my breath
across the universe
that is between us.
If you enjoy my poems, here are some more:
haiku: fraught
sestina: rainy day existentialist


enjoyed the one single o poem, however
ReplyDeletethe your love is a disease haiku has
blown me away LUV!
I'm particularly fond of the haiku but the Hesitation poem is lovely, for sure!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful hesitation poem! Love it!
ReplyDeleteKeep on sharing your talent!!!
I loved both poems...gorgeous words! The hesitation poem evoked great visual imagery.
ReplyDeleteYour haiku: I found myself wondering what made this love "dirty." Your words just brought that to mind — a lurid love affair. It's very effective.
ReplyDeleteWhat a perfectly delectable haiku!
ReplyDeleteWasting disease
Your love poem was awesome. I enjoyed the OSI poem also but your haiku took my breath away.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
i dig amy nonorehab.... sorry for her troubles tho...sorta like billie holiday...anyhow...i love, love, love yr reflections of a kiss waiting on wings....
ReplyDeleteI love both of your poems; they are rich in imagery~
ReplyDeleteYour haiku was pure magic! Who couldn't make a meal of desert? Enjoyed the hesitation poem, so easy to remember those times.
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