Sunday, May 16, 2010

One Single Impression: Trembling

The prompt from OSI this week is trembling.  Here is my go at it.



Water mirrors blue;
perfect, still. Gentle winds come,
cerulean sky trembling.

6 comments:

  1. This is wonderful. Your words speak gently to the trembling.

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  2. I love how you have the sky tremble, not the water. Clever take, beautiful picture.

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  3. lovely, your words take me there...

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  4. lovely trembling work of nature!

    loved it!

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  5. Nice work. Love the imagery....


    Melanie

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  6. beautiful!!! Great connection between your poem and the picture!

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