Sunday, August 29, 2010

One Single Impression: Empty

The prompt for OSI is empty.


your thick voice echoes
through the canyons in my heart,
sky-bright and empty.

11 comments:

  1. Oh, yeah; the space, the echo, the emptiness. Marvelous.

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  2. Beautiful Haiku.. I too am Hikued.. do visit to see if I am..

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  3. Echoes and empty - - - Beautifully combined. Nice Haiku

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  4. a beautiful and deep expression of emptiness - love the metaphor

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  5. very lovely haiku, i could even feel that feelings of emptiness! :)

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  6. Beautiful and very evocative.

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