Sunday, November 21, 2010

Night's Strange Apprentice


lost among phantoms
I am a ghost in a dream,
night's strange apprentice.

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14 comments:

  1. I enjoyed reading your dream. An apprentice - very good.

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  2. Ghost in a dream--what a wonderful line. I really enjoyed this one.

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  3. Phantoms is a favorite image of mine - love your poem!

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  4. May night be a worthy teacher.

    Thanks for this.

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  5. A ghost who walks and now teaches !! New idea for apprenticeship :)

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  6. Brilliant! This poem says so much!

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  7. Well, well, well, and onething..nigh always teaches..only one needs to learn..

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  8. An apprentice phantom! Hope night teaches her well.

    Good wishes, Lena.

    Carlos

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  9. I like the imagery you create in your haiku. Nicely written.

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  10. A phantom of a dream...nice thoughts Sol!

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  11. It is better, I think, to be a "ghost in a dream" than a ghost of a dream. There's something more substantial about the former than the latter. Or is there? (Oh, my convoluted early-morning musings!)


    OSI: Apprentice

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  12. What a totally original take on the theme... I enjoyed it and love the imagery of one ghost in a dream being lost amongst all the other ghosts in the dream... Well done.

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  13. apprentice of night.. i like that imagery! :) wonderful

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