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I enjoyed reading your dream. An apprentice - very good.
Ghost in a dream--what a wonderful line. I really enjoyed this one.
Phantoms is a favorite image of mine - love your poem!
May night be a worthy teacher. Thanks for this.
A ghost who walks and now teaches !! New idea for apprenticeship :)
Brilliant! This poem says so much!
Well, well, well, and onething..nigh always teaches..only one needs to learn..
An apprentice phantom! Hope night teaches her well.Good wishes, Lena.Carlos
I like the imagery you create in your haiku. Nicely written.
A phantom of a dream...nice thoughts Sol!
It is better, I think, to be a "ghost in a dream" than a ghost of a dream. There's something more substantial about the former than the latter. Or is there? (Oh, my convoluted early-morning musings!)OSI: Apprentice
wonderful pieceand so unique
What a totally original take on the theme... I enjoyed it and love the imagery of one ghost in a dream being lost amongst all the other ghosts in the dream... Well done.
apprentice of night.. i like that imagery! :) wonderful