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Oh how nice it would be to enter the carnival of dreams, and do away with insomnia
How wonderful a piece to be read during the night. Please have a good start of the new week.daily athens
I love how you described insomnia as floating...wonderful poem!
I liked the end line.. from carnival of dreams, you may like to visit my carnival of thoughts..
I liked how you described dreams swirling, almost seemed like they are blending into a carnival of color and ideas. Like a whirlpool drawing a person into sleep. (Stopping by from the One Single Impression roundup)
That was last night for me, exactly. Thanks for this beautiful poem.
Eyes wide open, watch the wonderful orb till sleep drifts you to a carnival in colors. Having the best of both worlds ...very well done.
nighttime carnival—every sleep a little deathevery death a dreamCarnival
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