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dance into memory?love the line, musical Haiku.
Very nice Haiku, I could feel the energy and desire in this piece. Great work, so powerful in so few words! Thanks for sharing!
I love that line, 'dance into memory'.
Very nice - beautiful energy in this!
I love this. I am wondering if it's possible to dance so much of the recent past into memory. I don't know. But you give me hope.
oh, this is wonderful!!
Yes, dance this moment.. beautiful..
"Let's take it into the sky..."This was so lovely. I could feel myself sailing up, up, up.
This had a lot of motion for me, movement not just in the idea of a dance, but in the word choice - very alive and energetic, urging the reader to come along and dance in the moment to preserve it inside the body.
Beautiful line "dance this moment into memory." A fitting poem for OSI. Nicely done!
A beautiful image. I am thinking of sharing the pleasure of creating memories with a beloved. As yet, an imagined joy.
just fabulous. wow. create a lovely memory and keep it. like the idea.trishahttp://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/20/free-soul-20th-feb-2011/
Thank you. Thank you for reminding me. We should dance. We should dance for joy. We should dance for every joy. We should dance for every image of every joythe day brings us. Thanks againfor reminding me. I forgot.
I love this phrase: "dancethis moment into memory."