in sizzling cold sea water,
accidental heaven.
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beautiful sentiment Lena.
ReplyDeleteoh, that cold would be worth it I think, Lena :D nice sentiment!
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery in this haiku. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThis is really beautiful..accidental? No, no..just pulling.. very well done..
ReplyDeleteOh, Yes! I'd love to be in that sea water right now!
ReplyDeleteHere's my take:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/09/madly-accidental/
nicely composed.
ReplyDeleteWell expressed!!
ReplyDeleteIt is a very beautiful, and somewhat sad, poem. Right now, the sea water is cold here, too, and the beach is totally deserted, so it rings with a special tune to me. I love the winter see!
ReplyDeleteUhm, sorry, *winter sea* is what I meant.
ReplyDeletedivine imagery.
ReplyDeletelove it.
:)