Sunday, February 5, 2012

Haiku Spider

humming a death tune,
the breeze vibrates silken strings.
octave approaches.

6 comments:

  1. The tune of the breeze might be deadly, but it definitely wont deter the spider! :)

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  2. Stealthy death threads itself throughout our days, stalks us silently until we succomb. Well done.

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  3. I believe I have heard that tune once or twice in my lifetime. It's both seductive and dangerous!

    Music Lesson

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  4. A beautiful yet deadly song. I enjoyed the contrasts you draw in this haiku.

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